sugar lips
with lips sweet as the
tea we drank, i didn't want
to open my eyes.
tea we drank, i didn't want
to open my eyes.
posted by kim at 6:16 PM
just a fun, simple challenge to write at least one haiku every day for a year. "Above all, a Haiku must be very simple and free of all poetic trickery and make a little picture and yet be as airy and graceful as a Vivaldi Pastorella." -Jack Kerouac
posted by kim at 6:16 PM
2 Comments:
move my finger tip
her back is like a canvas
her quiet snore
what john used to say is true
her body like Wonderland
a little 'tanka' style.
tanka is a lengthened version of haiku.
you can go 5-7-5-7-7
tanka rating: PG-13, children over the age of 13 must have a parent present to read this poetry.
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