Saturday, December 16, 2006

sugar lips

with lips sweet as the
tea we drank, i didn't want
to open my eyes.

2 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

move my finger tip
her back is like a canvas
her quiet snore
what john used to say is true
her body like Wonderland


a little 'tanka' style.
tanka is a lengthened version of haiku.
you can go 5-7-5-7-7

10:04 AM  
Blogger kim said...

tanka rating: PG-13, children over the age of 13 must have a parent present to read this poetry.

4:27 PM  

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